Wednesday, April 16, 2008

NO FAITH

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NO FAITH...
My joy
My grudge
My sweat
My blood
All mine
Not yours
NO FAITH...
My love
My grouse
My genius
My flaws
All mine
Not yours
NO FAITH...
Empty facades
Broken shards
Smirking masks
House of cards
All yours
Not mine
NO FAITH...
Ink touches paper, words come slow
Why this must be, I do not know
My cup runneth over, oceans in my eyes
And emotions must flow, emotions must flow

6 comments:

  1. LOVE IT!

    so different yet so...so... true

    My favorite:

    Empty facades
    Broken shards
    Smirking masks
    House of cards
    All yours
    Not mine
    NO FAITH...
    Ink touches paper, words come slow
    Why this must be, I do not know
    My cup runneth over, oceans in my eyes
    And emotions must flow, emotions must flow

    SUPERB!

    Rhea

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  2. Well, don't most of us feel that way on and off? Whatever you are feeling to produce such verse is normal, for a feeling, discerning person (okay I tend to use that word much too often).

    My theory is-- One may feel lonely amidst a crowd, like a misfit, even superior in thought(yes, even at the risk of sounding pompous) among scores of so-called friends, collegues, boss etc. But hey, it's important not to be carried away by the current 'cuz it's imperative to remain deep-rooted in one's true self despite the marked sense of isolation from the "happening crowd". I say it's a good thing my love.
    I launched off into this because your verse took me there. Not in a bid to preach or be presumptuous.

    It is your ability to be yourself that makes you soo..deeelish...well I can hardly keep from spouting substantial superlatives about you, but, since you must be tired of all the mushy praise you get, shall refrain for the present.
    take care,

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  3. There is the ultimate truth in your words. It speaks the real truth. It is wonderful.

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  4. No words to describe a poetry written with so many emotions overflowing...one can see your soul pouring out in each phrase of your writing...I have read it over and over again.....Life is really bitter sweet

    Rupal

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  5. Hi Meiyang,

    Life is best viewed when its described in its total cruelty.........and it needs a void an emptiness to write it blatantly.........and these words when touched your vocal chords...became an Acceptance...

    Those empty facades......broken shards....smirking masks.....house of cards.....they tell you the whole story....never forget them.....or you won't cherish what you have....

    And yes....Faith is one thing....for it can come and go........

    But Your Fate is Yours....it remains so......

    so do your best....

    Rest....God Bless....

    Bye and take care.

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  6. I once again stop by your blog to check on your latest flow of emotions :) and find myself with increased admiration for you. I am never short of things to say, find myself numb everytime I read your blog. Simply soul capturing! Really enjoyed "No Faith" and "Phir".

    Look forward to more....

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